Grammer is just fucked other than that's a simple plot.

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what the fuck is this? this plot is fucking messed up. I would recommend you to read this. The main girl and the boy can't even have knowledge and common sense. theyre just hurting each other's self.

This shit is a bullshit i know i already read this in another website but she is still stupid on the future chapters.

But the fuckin obssesive ml is still fuckin bullshit he still treat the stupid girl shit and he treat her like an 🙄OBJECT🙄.

Nah, in chapter 40 the stupid girl she is still stupid

the girl is so stupid even in chap.40 agh

Grammar is non existent and I can barely understand it 🤣 also the characters have like no personalities they’re either stupid or evil

🤣🤣🤣 *grammar left the chat

this story is so stupid.... the plot is so fucked up

It is absolutely awful. The plot has nothing good to it, it’s unrealistic and has no way of being possible unless set a very long time ago. The SETTING is not a long time ago and so in a modern day, which is what it looks like, it wouldn’t work at all. The characters are absolutely shit, because the main girl has no common sense and definitely wouldn’t exist, the “wife” doesn’t seem to understand anything and acts purely on malice also non existent. The main guy is absolute crap, I needn’t say more. All of them are based off of simple traits that can’t exist solely without ruining any story. So non existent and irritating. The blonde is dumb, not even talking about the disorder but genuinely. The wife’s a bitch. And the guy. That guy is just so that guy I want to jump of a bridge. Not worth a read at all. Awesome artwork tho!

By reading this I can see a good comic in the making you just need some grammar punctuation over your comic to make the words make sense. Plus by reading this i can see that English isn’t your strong suit so you should ask some people to help read over your comic to fix your grammar errors.

All characters are fucked up

it's pretty interesting I can't wait for more chapters and it has some bad grammar but it is still good