There's a lot of things to work on... Drawing sketches first is the best for making comics, and also using multiple layers for color, lineart, etc.
Also look up some references for anatomy and points of view, every character looks pretty wonky. And maybe try to upload the panels in better resolution.

the heck the thumbnail looks like  kagura from FAIRY TAIL and all of the character is girl

Yikes...

what? this is complete and utter trash just stop.

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keep it OwOb

didn't like it

this is the greatest manga I've ever seen

Very cool. Keep the hardwork

Pretty cool?