4.0
9 votes
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4.5
11 votes
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5
81%
4
0%
3
9%
2
0%
1
9%
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It still needs a bit work, Expressions,mood, and plot, right now im kind of bored with how it is, you need to capture the readers attention and dont ever let it go of it, You also need to show us more back round info, I like it for now and because im sure it'll improve im gonna give it a 5 star♡♡♡♡♡