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First off, I wanna say that there's a lot of potential in your art style. Right now it seems a bit too simplistic at times, but there are moments where it really shines. I personally don't care for the pilot chapter, and a glaring issue between them is that you change the reading direction. In the pilot it was left to right, and in the next it was right to left. Needs a proof-reader as well.
Thank u so much for ur comment. The Miniserie is going to be a section in which the characters do random things that's why its art style is different and it's reading direction will be left to right. The actual series is left to right and in this pilot the focus point is the protagonist Kami. She will have that ode face most of the time, and her sister will always be serious. The contrast of their personallities will pop up when the rest of the principal cast appear. The beggining will be a bit slow like 5 to 6 chapters aprox. in order to understand what the entire manga is going to be. Thank u again for ur comment, I hope u stay tuned with my official instagram account: @piece_of_paper_productions.
