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For the followers of the lost secret beyond, I have left you a small gift in chapter 4 for your patience, in waiting for a new chapter to come out and in gratitude for attentively supporting me your dear newbie writer Hairdertz.
Just from skimming it it seems pretty good if anything just kinda make it a tad bit easier too tell who's talking just by like spacing the sentences when a different character is talking and if anything else maybe just add some kinda pictures to go along with it especially if the author is the same person who drew the cover art as art style wise its cool but take what I said with a grain of salt
@Goldenboy900jj Of course, thank you very much for your suggestion and I'm glad you liked it. in all my social networks you can find me as "Hairdertz".
also if you want any help with this I would absolutely help out, whether it be ideas or something else. Just wanted to share that, story looks incredible 10/10 @Goldenboy900jj on all socials if help is wanted
wait just read more the part where the characters are talking is great if anything when there's a change of who's talking just put the name in bold or som
